Storyboard tone pass for Alcatraz High

ALL interior pages linework is DONE! Now I am onto doing a gray tone pass through the book. Since I am a storyboard artist I wanted to do this book in a storyboard type style. I think it looks cool and since that is what I used to I can blaze right through and get this comic DONE!

I still have to do the cover, and so far it looks like Cover B is gonna be the winner.

Thanks guys for all your critiques, suggestions and support!